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The Night the Stars Fell by ~KT-:iconKT-:





Didn't I see you?
The night the stars fell...
You were dancing in the rain;
You had never looked more beautiful.
Soaked in enthrallment, I wondered
how you'd never caught my eye before.
You touched the sky and flew with my heart
As you uttered whispers of divinity.
Up in the clouds, you looked down on me,
And I cowered.
Your eyes filled my soul with shame and comfort,
to have the honour to experience such
surrealistic splendor.

You danced...

And in the midst of rain and stars,
You sang out my name and I fell.

That was the first time I ever saw an angel.
©2004-2009 ~KT-
:iconkt-:

Author's Comments

My writing had been rather bland lately, and I was really wanting to write something beautiful. I wrote this a few nights ago for Arin, when I felt hopeless, and like I had lost him. He means so much to me. I hope you can find this beautiful as well.
He did the picture for this poem, and gave me permission to use it.
You should check out his gallery. He's very talented. egoraptor

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:icongrimrippy:
That is really cool. Very pretty to look at. I like anything to do with angel like stuff.

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"We can tell other people about - having faith. What we had faith in. What we found important enough to fight for. It's not wether you were right or wrong, but how much faith you were willing to have, that decides the future."

--Solid Snake
:iconkt-:
*smile* Thank you!
:icongrimrippy:
No problem! I really like that pic!

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"We can tell other people about - having faith. What we had faith in. What we found important enough to fight for. It's not wether you were right or wrong, but how much faith you were willing to have, that decides the future."

--Solid Snake
:iconmiss-meg:
love the pic and the poem is very beautiful!
i really like it :)

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:iconkt-:
Thank you so much! That's like the best compliment someone could get when they write something that heartfelt. Thank youuuu! *huggles*
:iconmiss-meg:
:) i understand, its a lovely piece, you should be very pleased with yourself, hehe

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:iconobsidional:
It's very touching. Amazingly written.
:iconegoraptor:
Most beautiful poem ever.
:icont-rok:
thats really pretty ^_^ good job, both of you!!

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